Hi Dave, I spent some time looking over your hull. As I mentioned before you are very close with your detail. The main issue as far as I can make out is that your missile hatches end too soon, they need to end further back. In order for this to happen you will need to widen your missile hatches so that they take up more deck. Problem is you also need to try to maintain the missile hatch length to width ratio. Which leads me to suspect that your missile deck maybe is narrow. Jecobin plans also suffer from missile deck being too narrow. Still, you might get away with it by widening your hatches. Try drawing it out roughly on your deck. I have also taken the time to outline other areas of adjustment which would make your model more accurate. These are only my opinions though. Having no plans and just going by photos is always going to be subjective.
Differences between the four sister ships definitely. Res gets just her tower tiled no tiling on her hull. Revenge appears to have just been painted with rubberized paint. Repulse and Renown get the whole treatment tiled tower and hull, although there are slight differences in the tiling patterns and also bow sonar covers differ slightly.
Anyway, see what you make of my edit of your model hull photos below.
Differences between the four sister ships definitely. Res gets just her tower tiled no tiling on her hull. Revenge appears to have just been painted with rubberized paint. Repulse and Renown get the whole treatment tiled tower and hull, although there are slight differences in the tiling patterns and also bow sonar covers differ slightly.
Anyway, see what you make of my edit of your model hull photos below.

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